Before Dark title

sort of a poster/title page of a story im creating. I dunno if I want to write it as just fanfiction or if I should take some time to draw it into a comic. Its the story of a Rayman of an alternate dimension trying to save the world but ends up destroying it.
summary:
Before Dark
This is a tragedy of how two Rayman villains were born. It takes place in an alternate dimension and travels to the Rayman dimension we know of in the end. The world is becoming shrouded in darkness after Polokus is infected by a nightmare and the evils of the world. Soon his greed wishes to consume everything. Two defenders, the last of their kind and the best of friends, guard the last fortress of light in the world. However it ends tragically.

its coming soon whether its in comic or fanfic form so look for it. Try to guess who the good guys turned into villains are. hint: one of their names in half in the title, the other is in rayian and pre-head injury form.
rayman and associated characters belong to Ubisoft

prologue- [link]